This was quite interesting! I really liked how "Roman"" (assuming if it's their real name) is written so well, they're quite threatening, intimidating, and mysterious. Granted, that's all we can see in the demo but so far Roman is quite an interesting lil character (I do wonder if Roman is the villain... Who would play as the hero? Because I know our MC won't take that role at all). I also like how MC reacts to the situation in a slightly more realistic way, showing hostility, silence, and deflecting the tenseness with sharp sarcasm. I think they all work well to incorporate how, even though Roman is our love interest, so far nothing about their interactions are all happy-go-lucky. It makes me think we're gonna have an enemies to lovers moment with Roman and the corruption arc of our lil MC. Looking forward to further development of it!
If you're in a smartphone put the browser in desktop mode and play with the phone in the vertical, and if text is to small go to settings and put it in 150%
Hello, selected pronouns do not affect the MC's gender. The gender variable is changed in the interrogation scene where the options are "M", "F", or "X".
I love this so much! It has a lot of varied responses so it's easy actually to imagine yourself in the position of the narrator. I can't wait for the next update! <3 (/p)
Hi!! I played this a while ago, but I still think of it often!! It’s such a well written and thought out story line that I still am on the edge of my seat for an update; I highly recommend this to my friends when we talk about games like this. I cannot wait to see how this twists and turns! Can’t wait!!
I'm enjoying the story so far. One RO and no relationship bar actually giving me a relief, because I don't need to feel worry if my choice accidentally decrease the stats bar (my "gaming" side of brain treating IF like these more as a "game" than a "story", thus it's give me anxiety because the thought ofI just lost a point = game over.)
im so hooked on this storyline. like i truly love how our protag can be just as snarky and levelheaded as roman, especially compared to the often meek sounding protags ive seen in other stories. nothing wrong with that necessarily but the bitchy back and forth banter of two grumpy people is something i probably find way too much joy in, so thank you.
seriously looking forward to seeing how this progresses!
(Grabby hands at Roman) Give me this horrid bastard, I'm going to romance him so hard I ruin his life. I love this story so far- even though there's so little of it, I'm immediately entrenched in this little mystery world and obsessed with this awful gentleman. The UI isn't the most easy to access, it would be nice if it was a bit more clear how to open and access the menu and save. But honestly that's a really small thing compared to how great the writing is! I can't wait to see more!
I’m glad you’re enjoying the WIP! I will look at possibly changing the UI’s color scheme to make it more clear in the next update, thank you for the feedback.
This is so exciting!!! It feels like it could go in any direction from here, the anticipation is crazy haha. I also love the variety of dialogue options so far
Just a heads up that when you choose they/them pronouns for Roman, there are a few errors with the verbs (e.g. 'they smiles' which should be 'they smile')
Wow I really enjoyed reading this! The story so far is very cool and I really love a good enemies to lovers trope hehe Can't wait to see the next updates!!
This is just so incredible! The pacing and the story flows so easy. Just the perfect amount of details to set the scene, it's so intriguing and I don't know how I'll live until the next update! This is so unique and amazing 🖤
so far, the personality options for the mc have been really great !! i wish there was the option to not have the "i can hardly breathe/move/ect" comments, but this has really great potential !! nicely done :D
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This was quite interesting! I really liked how "Roman"" (assuming if it's their real name) is written so well, they're quite threatening, intimidating, and mysterious. Granted, that's all we can see in the demo but so far Roman is quite an interesting lil character (I do wonder if Roman is the villain... Who would play as the hero? Because I know our MC won't take that role at all). I also like how MC reacts to the situation in a slightly more realistic way, showing hostility, silence, and deflecting the tenseness with sharp sarcasm. I think they all work well to incorporate how, even though Roman is our love interest, so far nothing about their interactions are all happy-go-lucky. It makes me think we're gonna have an enemies to lovers moment with Roman and the corruption arc of our lil MC. Looking forward to further development of it!
Well done! I was swept away so fast; I need to know where this is going! Awesome touch with the playlist too.
this was so cool! its amazing how you write roman to be so charming yet terrifying. i can't wait for the next update
Loving it so far, cant wait for more!
This concept intrigues me! I look forward to any updates in the future :)!
Omfggg when IS THEEE NEXT UPDATE DID THE AUTHOR JUST DIP???
Not at all! Author has just had a crazy year :)
An update release is planned for later this month.
I can't seem to scroll down. I keep having to zoom out the entire page, sometimes to the point that I can't read anymore.
If you're in a smartphone put the browser in desktop mode and play with the phone in the vertical, and if text is to small go to settings and put it in 150%
I'm on a laptop. maybe it's an issue with my browse
i have the same issue
The only thing bad about this is that it isn't finished, lol.
I look forward to when you're able to update! I adore your writing style. :)
genuinely loved this. Had several responses that I would 100% say
cant wait for more!!!!
Hello, I don't think that you can choose your gender at all, whenever I choose he/him pronouns, the gender still becomes a Woman, not a man
Hello, selected pronouns do not affect the MC's gender. The gender variable is changed in the interrogation scene where the options are "M", "F", or "X".
I understand! Tysm! I read through chapter 1 and I'm dying to read through this. It's so much fun!!!
No problem! Thank you so much :)
I love this so much! It has a lot of varied responses so it's easy actually to imagine yourself in the position of the narrator. I can't wait for the next update! <3 (/p)
Thank you, I love that everyone is enjoying the different response options!
this is wonderful. I can't wait for more.
damn that was good i hope you update soon
Hi!! I played this a while ago, but I still think of it often!! It’s such a well written and thought out story line that I still am on the edge of my seat for an update; I highly recommend this to my friends when we talk about games like this. I cannot wait to see how this twists and turns! Can’t wait!!
That is so kind of you! I appreciate it :) I hope to have news of an update soon!
I am literally dying for an update on this, best one I have found!
That is very kind of you to say, thank you :
It's fun and cute can't wait for the other chapter
Hi, does this game still having update?
I'm enjoying the story so far. One RO and no relationship bar actually giving me a relief, because I don't need to feel worry if my choice accidentally decrease the stats bar (my "gaming" side of brain treating IF like these more as a "game" than a "story", thus it's give me anxiety because the thought of I just lost a point = game over.)
Hello, this project is very much a work in progress, but it is far from abandoned! I don’t have any release dates for updates, but stay tuned.
(I am so happy you are enjoying the RO!)
This is already so interesting!! Can't wait to read more~
Thank you ! :)
i need moooooreee
Haha, working on it as best as I can!
Ahhhhhhh this is so exciting!
Can't wait for more ;_;
I literally don't know what to expect from the future chapters, it's so interesting!
There is only one RO but I love him already ✨
I'm glad everyone adores Roman as much as I do!
Thank you :)
im so hooked on this storyline. like i truly love how our protag can be just as snarky and levelheaded as roman, especially compared to the often meek sounding protags ive seen in other stories. nothing wrong with that necessarily but the bitchy back and forth banter of two grumpy people is something i probably find way too much joy in, so thank you.
seriously looking forward to seeing how this progresses!
I wanted the dialogue options to be diverse (even for us grumpy people). Thank you so much, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story!
(Grabby hands at Roman) Give me this horrid bastard, I'm going to romance him so hard I ruin his life. I love this story so far- even though there's so little of it, I'm immediately entrenched in this little mystery world and obsessed with this awful gentleman. The UI isn't the most easy to access, it would be nice if it was a bit more clear how to open and access the menu and save. But honestly that's a really small thing compared to how great the writing is! I can't wait to see more!
I’m glad you’re enjoying the WIP!
I will look at possibly changing the UI’s color scheme to make it more clear in the next update, thank you for the feedback.
This is so exciting!!! It feels like it could go in any direction from here, the anticipation is crazy haha. I also love the variety of dialogue options so far
Just a heads up that when you choose they/them pronouns for Roman, there are a few errors with the verbs (e.g. 'they smiles' which should be 'they smile')
V much looking forward to the next update :D
Thank you so much for letting me know!
AHHH such a good idea for a story!! Can't wait for the next update!
Thank you!!
this is so interesting! when's the next update??
The next update has no scheduled release date as I am currently working on my other WIP. Thank you so much for your interest!
So excited for the next update, I really love the concept of this & our love interest.
I’m extremely happy everyone loves the LI as much as I do! Thank you for the kind comment :)
Wow I really enjoyed reading this! The story so far is very cool and I really love a good enemies to lovers trope hehe Can't wait to see the next updates!!
Thank you so much!! Enemies to lovers >>
THIS HERE IS A VERY INTERESTING MASTERPIECE!!
Thank you so much :))
This is just so incredible! The pacing and the story flows so easy. Just the perfect amount of details to set the scene, it's so intriguing and I don't know how I'll live until the next update! This is so unique and amazing 🖤
Thank you so much for the kind words! ^_^
This is great, just the sort of trope I'm into! I can't wait for further updates.
We love enemies to lovers around here ;) Thank you so much! The next update is in the works.
Oh my god!! This is soo Amazing!!! The storylines, the concepts, Everything is Just SOO GREAT!!
Tho there are some errors (like there's parts where it repeats a paragraph) but otherwise it's all good :3
Can't wait for the full release :D
Good Job!
That’s very kind of you to say, thank you so much!
Any bugs or mistakes can be reported through tumblr or email. The information is appreciated!
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If there is a bug or other error you need to report, please send it through email or a tumblr ask.
No, all are pretty good
Thank you♡
This is great! I saw a few errors, but I really love the set up. When will the full game be released and how much? Thanks!
“Sinners” is a work in progress, and will be updated over time. A price hasn’t been decided.
This is very good! Can't wait to read more.
Thank you so much!
Font size and more will be added to the settings tab soon.
so far, the personality options for the mc have been really great !! i wish there was the option to not have the "i can hardly breathe/move/ect" comments, but this has really great potential !! nicely done :D
Thank you for the feedback!
Absolutely delightful, I hope this is to be a long running trend of great content to come.
I love it already!
Thank you! ♡
i..I LIKE THIS A LOOT! It has a real, exciting potential. Kudos to the writer!
Thank you, thank you!!