There's a bit of an error after choosing your weapon. If you choose staff, the next page will say "they set the hilt of your sword in your waiting hand." This happens whether you choose to trust Yezda or not. However, if you chose not to trust Yezda, the following line will say "as you secure your staff," so it seems that it's properly logging your choice, and it's just that one line that doesn't update.
Later on, when fighting the third warrik outside "the ruins of your old city," it'll say "your grip on your bow steadies" after choosing to "lunge beneath it" or "stand your ground." In addition, if you choose to stand your ground, it'll also say "you throw your body behind your blade" and "you wrench your blade clear."
There are quite a few errors regarding scripting apparently, choosing to go to the forsaken village seems to work, until a few pages after when it mentions Asahi leaning against a cave wall, even though a barely standing cottage was the refuge of choice there.
Speaking of forsaken village, that one also has a mention of you wielding a bow during the fight, regardless of the weapon you chose.
cant seem to get past the stage where you can get help with your bandages :( gives me this popup and i cant progress onwards no matter what i click. otherwise ive been enjoying everything so far!! keep up the good work
The new update seems to have a lot of choices that don't link properly. Its hard to categorize all of them, but the most notable one I found is that if I select "I dont drink" I still accept the drink. It also made me select my height twice, probably one of the links doubled back onto a previous passage from a different route or smth? There's also a lot of broken if statements, like if I ask Yezda to help me with bandages there's like 2 broken on the same page. A few others that I forgot where they are, but basically the code needs to be looked back over pretty carefully.
But, the chapter was quite enjoyable and I'm excited to see it cleaned up and read the rest of the story as it continues.
That is actually a cycling variable. As you click it should give you three different options. Whichever option you leave as you continue onto the next page will be locked in.
It's great so far! But one thing I noticed is when the group gets to cave and Asahi is offering to help MC remove their armor/bunching up the bottoms, it doesn't let me get past that point no matter which option I choose. Just wanted to let you know just in case.
I don't know if you're going to update this, but what I read is good. I like the premise of the story, and can't wait to read what happens next. I did not want what we gotten to stop.
Thanks for reading! The full first chapter is available on my Patreon. As I publish more chapters I will most likely be updating this demo to include the full first chapter, however that will not be for some time.
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Enjoyed this a lot! Excited for more!
There's a bit of an error after choosing your weapon. If you choose staff, the next page will say "they set the hilt of your sword in your waiting hand." This happens whether you choose to trust Yezda or not. However, if you chose not to trust Yezda, the following line will say "as you secure your staff," so it seems that it's properly logging your choice, and it's just that one line that doesn't update.
Later on, when fighting the third warrik outside "the ruins of your old city," it'll say "your grip on your bow steadies" after choosing to "lunge beneath it" or "stand your ground." In addition, if you choose to stand your ground, it'll also say "you throw your body behind your blade" and "you wrench your blade clear."
There are quite a few errors regarding scripting apparently, choosing to go to the forsaken village seems to work, until a few pages after when it mentions Asahi leaning against a cave wall, even though a barely standing cottage was the refuge of choice there.
Speaking of forsaken village, that one also has a mention of you wielding a bow during the fight, regardless of the weapon you chose.
Sorry for the late response, but these script issues should all be fixed now. Thank you for giving my book a chance!
That's fine! I know making games takes time and I'm just excited to see new IFs coming out regardless.
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cant seem to get past the stage where you can get help with your bandages :( gives me this popup and i cant progress onwards no matter what i click.
otherwise ive been enjoying everything so far!! keep up the good work
That should be fixed! Let me know if the issue persists
The new update seems to have a lot of choices that don't link properly. Its hard to categorize all of them, but the most notable one I found is that if I select "I dont drink" I still accept the drink. It also made me select my height twice, probably one of the links doubled back onto a previous passage from a different route or smth? There's also a lot of broken if statements, like if I ask Yezda to help me with bandages there's like 2 broken on the same page. A few others that I forgot where they are, but basically the code needs to be looked back over pretty carefully.
But, the chapter was quite enjoyable and I'm excited to see it cleaned up and read the rest of the story as it continues.
I combed through those passages and believe all of those should be fixed. Thank you for letting me know. I hope you enjoy reading the rest!
hi!! this look good but when i choose my gender as male, the next screen says that i chose woman?
That is actually a cycling variable. As you click it should give you three different options. Whichever option you leave as you continue onto the next page will be locked in.
Let me know if you have any other trouble!
OHHH SORRY
It's great so far! But one thing I noticed is when the group gets to cave and Asahi is offering to help MC remove their armor/bunching up the bottoms, it doesn't let me get past that point no matter which option I choose. Just wanted to let you know just in case.
Again, the update was great!
Thank you for letting me know! That should be fixed.
I don't know if you're going to update this, but what I read is good. I like the premise of the story, and can't wait to read what happens next. I did not want what we gotten to stop.
Thanks for reading! The full first chapter is available on my Patreon. As I publish more chapters I will most likely be updating this demo to include the full first chapter, however that will not be for some time.
nothing shows up 😭
It’s been fixed! Sorry about that.
Nothing is displayed except a green background.
Everything should be in working order now!